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White Rose is the Tribal Mystic in the City of the Golden Hoof, a village made of solid gold inhabited by an ancient tribe of Bat Ponies. And though Rose is a Unicorn, her abilities of reading the dreams of Ponies and communicating with the Spirits of Old make her the most powerful of her tribe; her ability comes from the communion of her parents: Robert Gilhelm, " a Bat Pony who was once the Mystic before Rose; and Anastasia an earth pony explorer from a faraway land.

,how ever Anastasia had become overwhelm with the Knowles of being the queen and that came with anger and rage, 'but then a blessing came she give birth to her second child, 'known as white rose,
'but when white rose was age five she dream that a sickness would hit her tribe she told her mother about the dream but Anastasia did not listen until the batponys were hit by a evil illness. then Anastasia realize that white rose was right about the illness" . so from that day on white rose would told her mother about her message that she would get in her sleep.

"how ever Anastasia overwhelm her by waking her every time when she had a dream message . 'and white rose needed her rest you see during the night the batponys would be up all night , 'but bianca sleep in the night time but do to the fact that her mother stay up at night, 'white rose could never sleep.

."and yet she had a sister her name was angel saint who was a bat pony like her father and her cutie mark was a lamp she had the Talen to inspired those who hide there gifts and she always look out for white rose, "and there father who was soft spoken bat pony had the talent to play any guitar which cheer white rose when she was sad he was call bobby.g, '

, 'but there wa a time when white rose had enough of her mother, "so her sister and her father help her escape her mother wraith, "so white rose travel though equestria ."as white rose travel she meet minotaur's, dragons and griffin. 'some were mean some were nice, "but then white rose was so lost, "she didn't know what to do until she meet the bat pony's they remind her of her older sister.


.she ask them if they could help her get back to the right path. "so they help her out by giving her a map to get out of the jungle. "as the years past she learn to use her skills, 'but it was hard task she had to master them on her own, she has one power that link her to princess Luna 'she could read dreams and they would come true, "white rose had another power but it was a strange power for a unicorn to have ."she had the ability to talk to pony's of the past and she would ask them advice,

"as white rose find an old temple. 'and it was very old it look like there was a great battle there, "then she hear crying and fine a baby ailcorn with blue coat and purple mane she name it raven and took her in as her child, "white rose raise raven like any filly .

'at this time white rose and raven got them self out of the swamp. "but the too were lost and hungry and they did not know where to go."until a group of show pony's came down the road in there truck and saw the too looking so lost," then there leader of show pony name spotlight came up to them and ask them if they wish to travel with them, 'and white rose look at her child and see raven didn't look to will. white rose happy say yes, 'so white rose and raven became show pony's .

'raven studied to learn to fly though the air at this time do to her show pony friends begin to teach the young filly's, 'and do to the fact that white rose had the gift to talk to ghosts those too end up in a good line of work . "by the time raven reach age 10. "raven and white rose had earn lot of coins which they use to buy a waging which bianca pull it as they travel in the mean time raven fly right beside her, 'ohh those white rose begin to wonder if she can fine a true home for her and her child,

"little did she knew she was about to meet her soulmate but she not know it yet,"jayko was a earth pony who love to write storys , 'but his family wanted him to grow potato's like there family has been doing for Generations ," but he hate to grow potato's even those he love eating them but," it was boring life chose." he was more reading, until one day he notice the most lovely thing ever a lady and her child , "they hungry and lost so he let them into his home his family treated good and for a while they stay,

'then white rose would help them around the house ."jayko didn't mind the help and neither did his mother they did need it," until white rose fined the book that jayko was working on ,"as she read the story she love the idea that created," white rose walk up to him and told him that jayko was a good writing. and that made him smile the too didn't know it but they were in love and raven treated him like a father figure since she didn't have a father,

"then it was about time for white rose and raven to travel once again, ' so he made a big decision" . "he explain to His parents the he wanted to travel with white rose and her child, 'they knew he had to go, 'so the hug there son and wave goodbye. "white rose and raven were shock to see jayko with them but it seem to me that white didn't mind it and raven did love him as a dad,


diffent towns then when they went to each town he would sell one of his books and they would be a hit with every pony. each town love his books and her dolls, until they fine pony Ville and they move to a small house,
then a month later he sold his book and pony Ville love it so he deiced to have a book store of his own with pleas his family .now his flaw are, he tent to talk over someone and he had a hard head when
ever he in a fight with the colt if they anything on raven his best friends are big mac and his cutie mark is w and pencil

"but they came a time when he had to leave her to be with white rose and raven,will the way white rose is she me am caring i handle monsters like my mom will i like singing to flowers i like reading in a garden and i stand up for my self if am or my family in danger and am a hard working in my family

yes she has flaws , i can be angry at time
and i cant control my temple it i hate it when no one listen to mei get a little head stonge and yell to get things done."but i do end up hurting the pony's i love and i regret that every day,"
white rose her family move to pony vile, 'when discord attack pony the second time,"she mother has too teenage pony daughters, "and has a husband and her cutie mark is the needle and tread , 'she love to make dolls and blankets for filly who need them, "and she tricky she give you a hard riddle and she clever, s

"but there one spell she never use , 'she only use it if she and her family or friends are in trouble. , 'bianca love to read many types of book like mystery adventure and ghosts, "she love her family very much she would do her best to make them happy she kind helpful' "her mane weapon is a sword.
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I honestly don't like the color. Bright red, brown and bright blue clash too much with each other. Art wise, it's actually a very cute art style, even if it's very different from the show.

Bio wise, sorry to say but she sounds like a Mary Sue and is way too overpowered. She doesn't really have much of a fleshed out personality, nor did you mention any of her flaws that make her a solid character.

I also think her backstory needs to be fleshed out a lot more if you're going to keep these powers. Why does she have them?